Sexy Sadie

Hello Moon14, Very sad poem. -this is something I just wanna savor.- Don't put wanna, it sounds so unprofessional. Use want to instead. -Never before have I felt this way, ...

Sureal (Cool name by the way)- I liked this, like the first critique, I do hope this continues, which, I see, it will. Although, how can the humans see the ...

My God! Wow! I really don't know what to say to make this any better. I really enjoy your writing, I've only been on here three days (yes, I think?) ...

Hello, I read the Prolouge and the first chapter, but was too lazy to crit, so I'll just crit on this chapter. I thought the other two parts were amazing ...

Clograbby, I'm not very familiar in the ways of the teenage girl, even though I have a thirteen year old sis, but I liked it very much. One question though, ...

Both of them were named Sadie? A little strange, eh? Yet very cool.

BigBadBear, I saw this title and was immediately intrigued! This is very creative writing. I read the first six before the seventh (even though I did see the seventh before ...

Hello Gryphon Fledgling (BTW, very sweet avatar), Wonderful story, I must say, but I did see a few mistakes along the way, nothing huge, I mean anyone could have made ...

Tell your boyfriend his name is really cool. I've never heard of it before, but then again, who's heard of a boy named Sadie? Quaker is a really cool name ...

It's ok, I get that alot. Bein different is my thing, I guess. -Sadie

My name is Sadie Lennon. I was born October 9, 1992. I live in Liverpool, England. My hero is John Lennon, I love the rest of the Beatles but John ...

Hey 17, Ok, I'm new too, so I really feel uncomfortable telling people what's wrong with their stuff, but here goes. First off, you need to fit more into your ...

Hey BloodSunset. Ok, here I go, first crit since I've joined this site so I hope I do O.K. I feel you in this poem. It's exactly how I felt ...